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Post by Tolazy on May 14, 2016 21:47:15 GMT -5
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Post by Kitsune on May 14, 2016 21:51:51 GMT -5
Wasn't me, though whoever wrote that seems to have copied my writing style and format.
Color me impressed
but we'll ignore it, because character development and such.
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Post by Kitsune on May 14, 2016 22:34:49 GMT -5
I find it amazing that "Katswune" copied my writing style almost perfectly!
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Ray was leaning up against a tree, breathing heavily. The sudden transformation of Winter and Kadari had unnerved him, how could two beastmen become something so...vicious? He sat and thought about it, and then he realized... something was terribly wrong, Winter when he attacked him, was wielding a two handed sword, and Winter never seemed to wield any weapons other than his own fists...
Kadari had three tails instead of nine, and was acting differently, he was energetic and eager to fight, not his cool, collected personality. Somehow, the fox-kid had tricked him, and he was going to find out how.
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The night passed with no more trouble, No one bothered the trio during the rest of the night, and everyone slept peacefully.the morning however, was a different story...
A wagon was being pulled by a donkey down a small dirt road, they were surrounded by many other armored men on horses. it was a caravan of soldiers, moving to wherever they were needed. it didn't take long for them to spot the trio out in the open and soon they were surrounded and ordered to lie on the ground.
The captain strode up to them on his white horse, his red coat of arms on his shield. Shoki froze when she saw him, it was the same captain she had freed a beastman from before! This wasn't going to end well.
"You there," he said to Winter, "stand up."
Winter did as he was told, "Sir, I-"
"I did not ask you to speak," The captain said roughly, he ordered one of his men to go through Winter's bag, and there, they found the dagger he had taken from Shoki
"Ah, a weapon," the captain said thoughtfully "I suppose you're a mercenary?` going to join in the ranks of our army?"
Winter nodded "My friend and I both were joining" he gestured to Kadari "We were taking my younger sister to live with my uncle while we fought"
The captain eyed Shoki, She didn't meet his gaze. "I remember you..." The captain muttered "Where's your father?"
Shoki didn't answer
Winter sighed "Our father was killed by a band of beastmen, the only reason we're alive is because of my quick thinking and skill in battle. I slayed the beast scum and saved my sister"
"Do you have proof of their deaths?"
"Check the bag, the stones are in there, i was going to turn them in, and use the bounty money to buy a good spear or axe."
Sure enough, the stones where there, and the captain offered to exchange them for some of his weapons.
"No thanks, i'll buy one in town."
The captain looked back at Shoki with an expression of pity, she had saved her father from death, but he was killed by beastmen, and her brother must leave her to fight in the war...
"Brave son," he said to Winter "I pardon you from military duty so you may care for your sister."
and with that, they left the trio...That is, until the captain was handed a wanted poster with Winter's face on it, then the soldiers turned around and charged at the trio, who were left with the choice, run or fight?
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Post by Blue Blade (Emerald) on May 15, 2016 0:53:03 GMT -5
Kadari didn't hesitate when he realized the trio was in trouble. He shove his foot solid into the ground, the earth itself anchoring him. His tails all flowed out, his eyes shining with his smile. His hands began to flow in the air, the wind soon followed the path, the air around them seemed to respond as if being called on. Kadari turned his head toward winter and shoki.
kadari- get ready to run. Spaan Ven Riik!
At the should of the strange words, the wind picked up all the fallen leaves, rocks and top soil it could and blasted it at the incoming battalion. What one could only describe as the wind forcing a wall out of the earth blocked the soldiers path, winter guided the two kitsune out of the battle field. Kadari made sure to grab the bag with the stones and account for all of them.
As the dust and wind finally settled, the soldiers looked around. The ground was torn up. Leaves flying everywhere in the air. Every soldier that was charging was covering in a thin soil. Some dents were in their armor from the rocks the wind picked up. As they tried to realize what just happen, the saw the state of the captain. Poor guy had thought it was smart to open his mouth to shout when a rock flew up into his throat, smashing his teeth. Hoping to hop into their cart to chase what they only got a glimpse of, they look to see that their wagon, donkey and most of their horses were gone. They fled instantly at the wind wall.
Far down the winding inner trails of the forest toward the mountains, deeper toward the wilds, the trio finally stopped running to breathe. The had been running what had felt like 4 hours. It helped that their inner beasts allowed for longer distance running and maneuvering. Winter, more concerned about how close that was, just stood there trying to get his sense of direction after checking for his knive and other belongings. Shiko was more interesting in Kadari, who despite being right in front of the wind wall, was spotless. His coat looked even CLEANER! Not only that, she wanted to know what the hell he did back there.
Shiko - Kadari... that... how? You threw... dirt using wind? Forced a tornado? made the earth spew leaves?
Kadari - *after catching his breathe* ancient passed down Wind Monk technique, grand wind wall. Useful for halting an advance or covering a retreat. Takes a few months to learn, more so to make it gain power. That was about a 2-3 on a 10 scale... Master Yasuori would be proud.
Kadari looked straight up into the sky then fell to his knees. He then held out his hands as a small green flame formed in his palm.
Kadari- Grant spirit of the winds, protector from the skies, thank you for your aid. You have my blessing once again. And to Master Yasuori, your teachings have not gone unappreciated. To both, my gratitude flows.
The wind slowly breezed by, calm and cool, elegantly making kadari's fur wave and his ears twitch. He smiled and stood up, nodding at shoki to give her thanks then prepare to know where to go next. As she lowered her head and whispered a thank you, she couldn't help but feel the wind feel a little more soothing against her.
Winter- Sssssso. Where'sss the next path toward our goal.
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Post by Kitsune on May 15, 2016 7:51:47 GMT -5
Kadari frowned, "Well, following the road we saw earlier would have given us a somewhat straight path to Nivana. But milatary garrisons are using that road..."
"We could wrap around and find a different path." Shoki suggested
"A good idea, but that might lengthen the time of our journey by who knows how long..."
they were discussing the best path when they were approached by Rayqwertza, who seemed to have still followed them after being scared off.
Again.
"Hold your horses." Ray called when the trio assumed a fighting stance. "I'm here to make amends for my actions"
He took the katana off his back and threw it to the ground, it landed with a soft thud. The trio visibly relaxed after the weapon was removed, Winter spoke first "Why the hell are you here?"
"I wanted to give my apology to you, for....trying to kill you and stuff..."
"Okay then, now leave."
"I also wanted to go you on your journey!"
Winter gave a harsh laugh, "sorry this team only has the resources for three people, not three people and a "Dragon""
"Maybe we could let him come with us!" Shoki piped up "A bigger team is a stronger team!"
"Didnt i just stop an entire battalion of soldiers by myself?" Kadari pointed out
"If we had helped you, you could probably stop even more! beastmen are outnumbered compared to humans anyway, the more we stick together, the better our chances of survival!" Shoki retorted
Kadari raised his eyebrows, where was all of the sudden knowledge coming from? did it just magically appear when she was arguing with people?
Kadari turned to Winter "She's right, we'll let him join us for now" his voice dropped to a whisper that even Shoki couldn't hear
"But one slip up, and we murder the dragon"
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The Hidden Hand
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Everyone is entitled to be stupid, but some abuse the privilege.
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Post by The Hidden Hand on May 16, 2016 14:00:59 GMT -5
i will drop by from time to time, just keep me in the story
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Post by Kitsune on May 16, 2016 14:29:03 GMT -5
i will drop by from time to time, just keep me in the story This is a completely different one! Which means you aren't in it.
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Post by Blue Blade (Emerald) on May 17, 2016 0:05:50 GMT -5
i will drop by from time to time, just keep me in the story This is a completely different one! Which means you aren't in it. Lets keep it that way.That aside, I dont know how to continue without the desire to end rayshitzas life by curb stomping his face into a boulder.
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Post by Crab 👏JUSTIN👏 on May 17, 2016 5:35:07 GMT -5
This is a completely different one! Which means you aren't in it. Lets keep it that way.That aside, I dont know how to continue without the desire to end rayshitzas life by curb stomping his face into a boulder. Rayqwertza gets to be the side villian :Y (sorry qwertz)
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Post by Tolazy on May 17, 2016 10:01:41 GMT -5
Why can't qwerty1 by the villain?
this is llllllllllllllllllllllaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaammmmnmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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Post by dumaniam on May 17, 2016 14:38:13 GMT -5
Reasons
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Post by Kitsune on May 17, 2016 15:52:58 GMT -5
Why can't qwerty1 by the villain? this is llllllllllllllllllllllaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaammmmnmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee I'm getting really tired of this guy.
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Post by Crab 👏JUSTIN👏 on May 18, 2016 4:19:49 GMT -5
One of the too lazy's has the same ip as qwerty.. but the other tolazy has a similar but different one...
we either have one to lazy or A BUNCH of tolazys
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Post by Kitsune on May 18, 2016 6:27:22 GMT -5
Based on Crab said, Who ever edits this next can kill Qwerty, just make sure it's done in an awesome way.
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Post by qwerty on May 18, 2016 8:30:34 GMT -5
Okay nuff said. I did do "Tolazy" for like ONE POST..... not all of them. I think just everyone's sharing the account... :-)
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